Here are my comments @vccardenas:
In section 1.1.2 you specify specific user and group IDs when creating the pbsdata user. You should add a note that these values are used as examples and that the tester should use appropriate values. Otherwise, you could reference a nonexistent group ID or specify a conflicting user ID.
In section 1.2 you instruct the tester to add the $usecp line. The directory is incorrect, it should be PBS_HOME/mom_priv/config. Is this step optional? If so, should you mention that it is optional?
I don't see the point of 1.6. What is it testing that hasn't already been tested?
The "usecp" line in 1.2 differs from the one in 2.2.1.
In section 4.2 change the prompt from "$" and "crayadm@login~/>" to "login$".
In section 4.4 the user should not have to be on another terminal. They can run apstat and qstat from the interactive job if they want.
In section 5.1.6 the command should be: xtopview -e "rpm -e pbspro-server"
This was recently updated in the Cray install instructions.